From Part One to Part Two: Areas I wanted to improve on as a comic book writer

Hello everyone,

I pray all is well. Four years ago, I set out to contribute to the comics landscape. That contribution soon became known as Lightweightz, and since then, I’ve been blessed to create, along with my amazing team of Przemyslaw R. Dedelis (art) and Lya (colors), two comic books:






And although it feels great to have two comics under my belt…what I really want is to get better as a writer with each new release. So with that said, here are some goals I set while creating Part Two which pertained to areas in which I wanted to improve on since Part One:

Improve my pacing

Make their abilities more central to their story

Include more action

Highlight their decisions as a window into their personalities and worldviews

For those of you who’ve read both, how do you think I fared in these areas? Share your thoughts in the comments section. For those who want to purchase Part One, Part Two, or both, visit the store.

About R-Squared Comicz

I'm a Christian, husband, student, & comic writer. I like comics, hip-hop, basketball, & learning, and at the end of the day, I pray that my life meant something.